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for The Long Black Coat

by bloodcultoffreud

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person nedgo101
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, telling this tale from Hermione's mother's point of view was the perfect angle. I am relieved by the end that Snape appears obsessed with Hermione, Hermione in love with Snape. I can understand her mother - she has to endure the world the pure bloods are inflicting on muggles - but I don't sympathize with her. You write such beautiful short character sketchs, I just love your stories.
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i recall reading this story a year or so ago - and was very happy to find it again - fantastic and the first story to get me hooked on dark fics - very happy to find one without smut in it too!
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was aonwderful, its the first story Ive read from Hermione\'s mother\'s point of veiw.
person satyr
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn. that\'s just damn. This is an absofuckinglutely amazing one-shot. pushed the air out of my chest.
person Droxy
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this again, but am I correct that you\'ve ehanced/changed bits of it? I saw on your LJ you are thinkingof writing an SS POV to this, I must encourage you to do so. Love the POV and the tone of this fic.
person missmaryrae
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a novel point of view. We don\'t usually get to see things from the Muggle perspective. Thanks for such a wonderful story!
person lemonade
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, if dark. I\'d love to see some other sides of the story, I hope you continue.
person cearrae
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Incredibley powerful and moving. I have said this in a review to another author - the quality of story coming out since HBP is wonderful. It\'s almost as though a shock wave has moved through and refreshed the genre. Thank you.
person Shadoe Austere
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Horribly realistic, yet fascinating, good job at the mother\'s conveyed hatred for snape. Great little bit you have here. I hope to read more from you in the near future.
-Shadoe SIRII Solaris Austere