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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for the next chapter dont take to long with it...
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter cat wait for the next one
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good storyline, impressive adaptation on the group, keep it up and this will be a great story
Cael
Cael
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story speaks well for itself sort of a \'res ipse loquitor\' of a literary nature. Looking forward to the next installment.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At the end of Chapter 4, I am impressed with the direction in which your Book 7 is going. Your writing is clean with only minor grammar and ortho problems (typos I would guess). I will comment more on your story as I go along. You are picking up the threads of Book 6 nicely and introducing new elements into the plot without doing damage to the original characteristics. Harry might be a little les hysterical, but you have painted a great scenario. Keep it up and you will have a full book before JKR has finished her year off.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit this is a totally wonderful story!!!!!
I like how you have weaved your characters together and not to mention the plots...
I LOVE Severus as a Ferret though considering how he and Sirius are with each other I would almost have pictured him as a cat.. (Cats and dogs get it? hehe)
I can\'t wait for you to update on this more can\'t wait to find out who Eris\' other mate potential is...is it just Sirius with Severus as mentor or is there another out there?
hope you update SOON SOON SOON. I absolute adore this story!
Gypsy.
I like how you have weaved your characters together and not to mention the plots...
I LOVE Severus as a Ferret though considering how he and Sirius are with each other I would almost have pictured him as a cat.. (Cats and dogs get it? hehe)
I can\'t wait for you to update on this more can\'t wait to find out who Eris\' other mate potential is...is it just Sirius with Severus as mentor or is there another out there?
hope you update SOON SOON SOON. I absolute adore this story!
Gypsy.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, dont take too long with the next chapter im dying to no what happens next....
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter had me welling up and everything, it was great cant wait for the next one
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no dont stop, please put the next chapter up soon : (
I hate suspense, this was great by the way
I hate suspense, this was great by the way
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be the best fanfiction i\'ve ever read, honestly. You\'re so talented and imaginative I have to read this story to its close. I hope you write the next chapter soon. I\'ll definatly be keeping an eye out for it.