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wow that was great .... i love it and her patronus please please please update soon i wouldlove to read more..later for now

angel

wow poor sirius.... thing will get better sooner or later .. i think ..please please update soon i would love to read more ..in till then later for now

angel

ohhh... Sirius is jealous again... but because of a dead guy? it happens, i guess! lol

I loved this chapter! I laughed, i cried, i yelled!

Please update soon!

loved this story! I can't wait for another update!

~lol~ i love it ..and the game they played ... please please more .. i just love it .. keep up the awesome work and later for now ....

angel

First of all, I want to say kudos on a wonderful story. It's a wonderfully well thought out plot, and a nice change from pointless smut, though I'm sure some readers are lamenting its absence. The only thing I found myself in disagreement with came about in chapter 17, when Snape told Harry that if he had refused to make the vow, Bellatrix would have been suspicious. I doubt that would have happened, because Bellatrix in fact seemed surprised that he would even dare to make the vow, and she saw that as a betrayal of Voldemorts orders. But that indiscrepency hardly mattered, because the rest of the scene made up for it (Snape admitting to Harry that Harry made him feel even more ashamed of the choice he had made), and then some. I have to admit, when I started reading this story and got to the part where Eris's elven inheritence was first mentioned, I was pretty skeptical, and expected it to be some stupid children's story. Thankfully, it's been great so far, and the elves havn't foiled the story at all :). Though I do wonder how receptive Ms. Rowling would be to this addition, hahaha. Anyways, good job so far, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Maniac Musician

I know youve probably heard this before but i totaly love your story. The types of topics covered in it normally dont appeal to me and honestly i found the story on a misclick but i read it and loved it. I know its a challenge fic but still those are just guidelines and how you went from there is great. Finnaly i know im nobody and my opinion means nothing but i thought i should let you know. Thank you.

Cant wait for more, will there be any more Remus and Eris?

This chapter was so meautiful! Well worth the wait. I was nearly tearing my hair out at the ned of the last one though lol. Cant wait for the next chapter, your writing is beautiful. I had a feeling the Hungarian Horntail was coming...what can I say? I'm psychic ^.^ Keep up the amazig work!

ahhh that song was so right for this chapter .... please please update soon i would love to read what they will so next ..keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel