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for Numen Pumilum

by AuctorRubra

person flower
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! that was a great chapter. Is the other baby severus'. i cant wait to see what happens next. that chapter was the best chapter that i have read in a long time. you always write really well but this chapter there something else. it was wonderful. keep up the good work and update soon.
person nikki
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! What is happening to Eris?!!?!?! Is she going over the deep end?? Please don't kill her, Severus, or Sirius, or anyone else on the light side off ! This STORY IS SUPERB!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK !!!!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the he** is she thinking ... please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

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person angel
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. but why did she skip her water form.... please please update soon later for now

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person angel
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco you did do the right thong ... please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

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person JJ
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good, so inviting, so well developed! This story is great! Your ups are hight and your downs are low. I just hope Eris can forgive everyone!
person A big fan
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the absolute best!!!! Keep on writing all of those kick ass chapters!!!
person Bree
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write any more of this? I'm quite interested...
person angel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ..please please please more i would love to read more ..later for now

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person nancy
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope its my computer that has teh problem, but your story is all messed up. I can't see beyond chapter 16 and the whole first chapther is gone !! WHat happened ,,, Please fix it , I love this story!!!