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Please update, i'm dying to know what happens.

Oy, I've never been one for reviews 'cause I can never think of much to say beyond 'good story' but this is more than just another good story. It's great, and not to mention one of the best (making it the worst for us readers) endings/cliff hangers ever!

hurry up darn you!

I think its very good, I also like the fact that all Eris does is feel sorry for herself and not thinking of how her decisions can effect other people, its tottaly in character and I'm so sick of reading other storys where the main character is oo so perfect and stuff. Good Job :)

GREAT CHAPTER!!! Please , please, please , don't kill off Eris!! Let her figure out another way !! PLEASE!!! But overall superb work !! I envy your creativiy and writing skills! Keep up the great work !

ohh no ... please please update soon i need to know what eris is up to .. in till then later for now

angel

i hope she can forgive severus and sirius ... please please update soon i would love to read with will happen next ..later for now

angel

Wow...this is an amazing story. Normally im a detached cynical person that after a chapter of a story thinks 'cool' or 'that was good' but this leaves me screaming for more after every chapter. This my favorite story on the site and the quality of the story and the speed at which your doing it continually amazes me.

I'm so glad they finally bonded!!! I hope things settle down between them now. This is just a guess , but Sirius , Severus , and Eris are all bonded together in a triad now aren't they? One of the twins is Severus's right? Keep up the great work!!!

okay... wow... I just spent about three-four hours reading your story, and I must say it was worth the time. This is definitely one of the best-written stories I have ever read on this site. The plot is excellent, and makes sense, and I really congratulate you on your grammar, as well as spelling. It was an entertaining, heart-rending read, basically all that should be in a story. I really hope Severus doesn't die... I like how you portrayed him in this story. It keeps in touch with his true self, but changes him to make him more... likable? Eris is such a sad character... I can't believe all that she's been through. I hope the story has a happy, but realistic ending. Overall, this is an amazing story, and you should definitely continue it. =)