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for Breaking the Dark Mark

by lightgoddess

person E
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really nice story, very much enjoyed it... Do you think you might write a second chapter or perhaps a sequel where we could find out how everyone will react to the two of them being together? Cause from what I understood while not exactly hating eachother the two of them were certainly not friendly at the beginning of the story, would just be nice to find out what other people might make of it:) Not that the story isn\'t good as it is, just want more is all lol
person jacob
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shack, can we get more now please? you know kind of amek it longer by oh I don\'t know showing the reast of eth stroy insted of cutting it off so abruptly?
person amanda
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i look forward to read more
person NightOwl
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love romantic storries with love developing and happyend! Very well!
person cdkobasiuk
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very romantic.

cdk
person fragonknight01
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Fluff...I love fluff. And now they are going to have to remodel the castle to make room for all the babies.
person mysticsong
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how I love your writing.

So nice after another day of HBP depression in debating theories and what not.
person Jesslynne
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so good!!! I loved this story!!! It actually brought tears to my eyes when I finished it. It was a very beautiful story that I\'ll probably reread millions of times over again.
person Kaiya
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW That was so sweet! I\'m crying! *Huggles Snape and Harry*
person Sakya
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very good. Let me just say it was amazing that you manage to do it in one shot (I wouldn\'t mind if it had been longer, of course, and I do envy your ability to write a one shot).

Anyway, just stoping by to say \"I love it\".