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for Breaking the Dark Mark

by lightgoddess

person HEARTSTAR
schedule May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
very nice very nice indeed
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know this story is years old but I just HAD to review - this is simply one of *the* best fanfictions I've ever read :) I don't think a proffesional writer could have done a better job, it was perfect. You had a great plot, the characters were in character and realistic, the description and imagery was amazing - just plain love it!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww that was so blimmin sweet! i just love these two : )
person Solomon
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story
person QueenNilya
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are going to write more to this freekin' awesome story???? I want to know what happens to our wonderful boys!!!!!!!
How does everyone react?? how did the mark disappear?? What does the Ministry do???? I want ANSWERS!!!!!!!
person Alexandra Noel
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS WONDERFUL! PLEASE ADD MORE! I would write more but I have homework -grumbles away about unfair rules that come up when you get back from being sick- But anyways... ^_^ YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER! KEEP IT UP!
my e-mails: angelgrl198816@hotmail.com (main)
-or- norgeangel89@yahoo.com (slash/mpreg)
Again you are great and PLEASE add more!
Please and Thank you,
Alexandra17
person shadow
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is really sweet. hehehe. Good job explaining the love that slowly build up between two characters. Cool.
person jess
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet
person me
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...now wasn\'t that a sweet fic? I liked a whole lot!
person Raija
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hate to say this because I am sure that Severus would kill me if he could but this was the most cutest ending I have rad in quite a while. Wonderful story and so emotional, at least for me. Go you! that\'s all I can say.