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Don\'t leave us in suspense. Keep it going.

Excellent!!!

Wow... this is really good. I hope you post more soon.

That was really a good start. Although I had only reached chapter 17! Oh my God, they kill Dumbledore ?! That cannot beeee. Grrrrr.
I think you\'re really a good writer, and your story is very promising. I\'m looking forward to the next chapters, even though I don\'t understand how anyone would be able to write fanfiction based on HBP when it has only been out for a week. When have you been reading that? I\'ve got the suspicion that you might have you got it earlier than the rest of us. Last month probably. Grrrr again. But good story. Nice parents you gave Hermione. Bye, Jenny.

Wow, I can\'t wait to see what happens next! I really enjoy it so far! :)

Ch 2 - I hope her parents are reasonable enough to listen to both sides of the story, not just the story that Harry told Hermione. Thanks for the new chapter - please update soon! Must find out if the new arrival is Snape or a Death Eater....

i like that you are taking it slow its good to give us all that insight into HG\'s fealings. i think too many authers rush ito things and there work souds more like a play by play than a story. i see HG as filling all our shoes as she is asking and pondering all the same things that HP readers are asking. i think you did a good job at discribing her anxiaty.

This story was the first one i\'ve read since i finished reading hbp, i just couldn\'t bring myself to read any , but i\'m glad i did, i like your story its really good so far, and hope you update quickly!!

This is a great story so far! I can\'t wait to read more! I love it! Keep up the great writting! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Tiffany

And this is on an adult fic site because? This saw the light of day at all because?