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for Betrayed

by footyfan

person Seeker
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s getting good! you got to update soon ^-^
person Bean
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s nicely written, very close to canon, and almost credible. The one thing I just couldn\'t take, was the idea of Neville taking
Hermione\'s virginity. I\'d have rather believed it had been Krum, or even Ron, since they were close enough for a few weeks
before the ending of HBP (as well as Harry and Ginny...Do you remember the comment about the tatoo on Harry\'s chest?).
person Avanell
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up...love it!
person Cyn
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very evil and I wonder what your concocting for the next chapter...hehe.....Hermione not a virgin...((omg)).....we all knew it....hehe....hope the next chapter is up soon....-Cyn
person me
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest? UPDATE! I am loving this so far, I wonder what\'s gonna happen....
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s tough. If I was a 16/17 year old girl who\'s only sexual experience had been with a bi-sexual Neville Longbottom, I would be scared as all hell of Snape. Me, right now? Naked Snape, and a nice can of whipped cream, all tied up in a big green bow. I feel pretty much the same about Lucius Malfoy. I think Hermione respects Snape\'s intelligence. That would be something they could build on. The mind is the only true sexual organ.
person princesse
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahem...you really like to torture us! right? you love cliffhangers that
person cherie
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it so far!! I think she has always respected him and maybe had a little crush, I would like to see that come out. I like him evilly good. He is always straddling that fence, but deep down I think he is good. Guess we will have to wait and see. But that is why we have fanfics. The Malfoys are always good for threats, but I am such a sap for happy endings. Let\'s face it life is depressing enough. Can\'t wait for the next update.
person princesse
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know... i guess I
person rlm
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update soon!