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for Betrayed

by footyfan

schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your slow seduction of Hermione. Please don't abandon this tale. By the way, how is it possible on this site to initial emails when you've updated?
person beeky63
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am eagerly awaiting an update. Please update soon. Toodles.
person Sea
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just happened upon your story. The image of Snape sucking his thumb is one I shall never forget! Good job!
person beeky63
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! You are evil! You keep us waiting all this time and then Snape gets drunk and passes out. Please update soon. Love this story.
Toodles.
person Cyn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and can really see it get very dark and good...hope you update anytime now....hehe.....hope you can do so very soon....much luck to you on writing another installment to a beautifully written dark fic with Snape and Hermione...-Cyn
person beeky63
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! Snape is so evil, he\'s delicious. You are also evil for leaving this at such a cliffhanger. please update soon, I can\'t wait.
Toodles.
person tanahara-chan
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is very interesting, please update as soon as you can, i look forward to reading what happens to hermione and snape next lol ;)
person beeky63
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT! HOT! HOT! And I\'m not talking about the weather. I wait for each update with baited breath. Don\'t keep us waiting to long. Keep up the good work.
person DH
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What would people like to see happen in the next few chapters?

-Why don\'t you decide this for yourself? People might like it more that way, especially since it\'s something you wrote.
person Jessica Nightingale
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Four words. A Very Good Fic.