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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start hope you keep it.............saucy^^
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has a lot of potential. Its a good plot idea where lots of things can come from it. Im not sure what to think about it at the moment because there wasn\'t enough to go on, but definitly continue, i could really see this becoming a wonderful story.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny and--I hope--sexah!
I like it so far!
I like it so far!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh, very exciting. Write more please!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very promising first chapter you