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by Ayan

person Gracie
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean. When I finished HBP I was so sad...I mean, how can I ever imagine HG/DM anymore? Or HG/SS? It\'s so sad...so tragic. The book was still pretty amazing though...it\'s just thrown a wrench into the fanfiction world.

Good story btw ;)
person Sexy Relly
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon Please!
person Alana
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, so please write more. I want to know what\'s gonna happen next?(besides the sex part). Plz update soon...
person b0rn s0 awed
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty interesting. nice plot. but please do check your spelling and grammar, though. can\'t wait for the next chap.
person Evil Saint
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, it
person Know-it-all
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OM goodness! this fic is so cute! And so steamy too! ^.^ please continue
person Sommer
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story so far.
Did you have theis posted somewhere else? If not i must have read on like it before.
Can\'t wait for more.
person 2bfoundwanting
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job, this story is getting better and better. I am glad that you aren\'t going to jump into romance, it is good to have hermione and draco as in character as possible even tho d/hr fics are by definition out of character for them. Continue in the direction your going and you will do great. Again, good job and update soon!
person Stephanie
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go on...... PoSt MoRe!
person nerd
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Taking care of someone like him consisted of head-aches and a soar throat by the next day, surely Dumbledore must have been out of his wits.


can you see the error is this sentence?


Soar is what a bird does \'a bird will soar through the air\'
saw \'i cut the wood with a saw\'
sore \'i have a sore throat\'



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