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by Ayan

person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep up writing
person Scarlett Raven
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update NOW......i mean soon...please this is areally great story.
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far, update soon please!
person Perhaps Witherwings
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyy nice story...aww the self concious hermione and the cold showered draco..i like it already.. however i have to disagree with you on one point.. i think that HBP left a lot of room for d/hr... SPOILER malfoy is definitely going to switch over to the light side..i mean his hesitation in killing dumbledore and the fact that he was crying in the bathroom.. and dumbledore obviously saw something in him to know to offer him a chance on the light side.. (and i think snape is not all that bad i think we\'ll find a better explanation of dumbledore\'s death..perhaps why no one in the Order seemed overly distraught with it and maybe the potion he drank having something to do with it... and perhaps an inferi sirius.. ooh i cannot wait until the next book) END SPOILER .. ps pls update the story i wanna see the surprise that draco left hermione...
person unknown soldier
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry about updating late. You actually updated earler than I expected! I\'m just happy you updated!
person penniez
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh ! This is good ! Please keep it going!
person Amura
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far. Everyone is in character and portrayed nicely, especially Ron.
This story is not THAT AU...actually it can be worked around and I found it quite close to post-HBP, so don\'t give up and keep on going. :)


person Panther Eyes
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don\'t tell me malfoy just poofed out of there.please continue.
person john the heavy
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn Hermione\'s being cold! I guess she didn\'t notice his excitment^^ I haven\'t read HBP yet so I hope you can keep the fic on this track because it\'s pretty damn good ;)
person Know-it-all
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!