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for Just One Kiss

by moirasfate

person Mars
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, please continue...! I really like the way she has a different opinion of him, and the way their interaction has changed since the battle.
person no1auntie
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you\'ve started this, without jumping into anything too far-fetched. I\'d be willing to beta for you, and help you clean up some pesky grammar and punctuation issues...
person merrclm
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far and am waiting patiently for the next chapter.
person kcj
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting start. I\'m looking forward to reading more.
person Katie K
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I love this so far! It\'s quite sad :-( but I love it.
person gaia
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concepts. I look forward to watching this progress.
person Expected Aberrance
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit different than the usual after-Final Battle fics. Promising and intriguing. I\'d like to see where you\'re taking it.