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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eee.. i like. maybe a few mistakes here and there.. but nothin big. you deserve so many reviews.. <3
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I guess the name of the movie wasn\'t important - lol Maybe you could entice us some more by indicating some sort of movie plot, something really outrageous and stupid.
I\'m surprised that the people in front of them, expecially the girls, didn\'t start up a conversation or something, or at least snicker a lot more.
Being a matinee movie, the theatre wasn\'t very full, or was it? The fic was short, probably by your own choice. You could have developed it a bit more by embellishing it by having more people and describing them or just describing how nervous Severus felt in a public place, until Harry got into his lap! lol
Loved to see the look on Ron\'s face - HA!
Can\'t wait for the swimming pool story.
Great story and your writing is good. Please keep posting.....Hmmmmm, swim trunks, on Severus....mmmmmmmm
I\'m surprised that the people in front of them, expecially the girls, didn\'t start up a conversation or something, or at least snicker a lot more.
Being a matinee movie, the theatre wasn\'t very full, or was it? The fic was short, probably by your own choice. You could have developed it a bit more by embellishing it by having more people and describing them or just describing how nervous Severus felt in a public place, until Harry got into his lap! lol
Loved to see the look on Ron\'s face - HA!
Can\'t wait for the swimming pool story.
Great story and your writing is good. Please keep posting.....Hmmmmm, swim trunks, on Severus....mmmmmmmm
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I would love a sequel with Harry dragging Sev to a pool that would be a great fic!! This fic was great as well. Loved it!!