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by ladycat

person scully
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot! and sweet too. i really like your style of writing, the flow of it and the subtle humour. i think i\'ll go see if you have written anything else..
person HarleyD
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another winner! I was a little unsure (got used to a draco pov) but this was just as beautiful! worried for a moment that my lovely draco wasn\'t gonna bottom... though he is a little topper from the bottom isn\'t he? cute lil thing. Great job.. though i fear i\'m reaching the end of your stories... only a few more.... great story! i wuv it!
person Shade_of_Solace
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It totally amazes me that there aren\'t more reviews for this. I think their characters are absolutely perfect! And the sex scene. Gah. I loved all of it. You\'re an amazing writer-keep up the good work.

-Shade of Solace
person Petalsoft
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Your writing style is really good and your descriptions of Harry\'s feelings and thoughts were wonderful. Good job all around. Is this a one shot? I hope there is more.
person CMS
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful. Please, please, please write more. It would be nice if it was a followup to this piece of art, but it doesn\'t have to be. This is a very graceful story.