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for All the Proud Shall Be

by ladycat

person HarleyD
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, you\'re a genius. This story is brilliant - its well written, the plot and writing flow very well, I absolutely adore a dominant Harry and the way you\'ve written it is wonderful - very believable, and Draco is just so damn adorable. Can\'t wait for more!
person Amessis
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Can\'t ait to see what Harry does to the others.
person v v
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting interpretation of Harry. I\'m quite liking it. I\'d be interested to see some of what is going on in Draco\'s head. Does he understand the developing nature of their relationship as Harry does not? Looking forward to the next chapter.

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person War-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With chapter.6 in I\'m slightly confuesed as to what really happend.......Harry and the Order crue fought off Lord V, yes? It just seems like sure randomness on the battle part to me............And I have a strong feeling that Remy is lying to Harry but, ahhh well........Can\'t wait for the UPDATE hopefuly it\'ll clear what the hell just happened. Oh! And where\'s Draco? O.o

Ja ne
SpeekingO\'Snape(in your story)......IsHeGoingToBeInThisMore?
Miss War-chan ^_~
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the poor darling! I can\'t wait for chapter 7!
person moidy
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story the details and passionate emotions you express through your characters really bring the story to life. it\'s been a while since i\'ve read something as well written and thoughtfully planned out as this. i\'m really looking forward to the next chapter.
moidy x
person tp
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i so love this story. i love the way you write the characters. i love the insights into their thoughts and actions. you are so brilliant. can\'t wait to read more, more, more. i\'m really looking forwards to reactions after draco\'s birthday and they can be open with everyone. i\'m also curious as to snape\'s plans and all. keep up the excellent work.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 6! I\'ve gotta know what happens next?
person razzle
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooo.....ladycat... when are you going to update....? this story is great and im completely addicted. please update soon
person Shade_of_Solace
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I\'ve read your story \"Frists\" as well and I\'m going to express the same sentiments as in that review-Why aren\'t people reviewing this more?!? I LOOOVVEEE the detail-it\'s so great! And the whole hand touching thing that\'s not quite sexual but still intimate is amazing. This story seems to have a kind of dream-feel to it sometimes but it\'s still so real. Like everything isn\'t just perfect, like a lot of people do. The aren\'t just these amazing kissers who suddenly decide one day, hey, i don\'t hate you. You\'ve added amazing dept to their relationship without having a complicated plot of Veelas or Vampires or the war. All in all, this is an amazing story and I can\'t wait to read more!

-Shade of Solace