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for Consequences

by Aline

person lilycat
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting- I am enjoying the gradual development of everything in surprising ways. It\'s great- can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Koppe
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. I\'m looking forward to more chapters, so keep it up.
I was a bit miffed that Hermione *wasn\'t* pregnant after all, but since she and Draco spent
most of the break together, I\'m guessing she could be now. I hope it\'ll turn out that they
can\'t -- despite their best intentions -- keep away from eachother.
Keep up the good work,
-Koppe
person jessica
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good u should really update soon
ja ne
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person Lorena
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that\'s what i call a chapter!!!. Wow, it was so descriptive, so pationate... I liked it, i hope hermione ends up pregnant this time!!! Please update soon, stop taking so long, you have us on our toes!!!
person Blipo
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! omg im so sorry i gave my fic the same title as yours! I should have checked! but I\'ve renamed mine now.

Sorry!!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very happy you updated. I really love this story. It made my week to see you updated. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Blipo
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe thanks just reading yours now, I had already read last resource in the past and I really enjoyed that, can\'t wait to find out what happens to Hermione and Draco in this one!
person Cassie
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man =) Hurry up with the next chapter, I can hardly wait, lol.
person Fantastica
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I thought that this story is pretty cool, update soon yeah?
Oh yeah, by the way, you are making one too many spelling and tense errors,
you should seriously consider someone checking your chapter before posting it.
Too many grammar errors can annoy the reader.
Just making some constructive critisism, don\'t take it the wrong way.
person jose
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, I am twisted enough to like that very much. I would rather have Luscious Lucius doing the deed but that is because I am more his age then Draco\'s. You could make Draco a little more sexy by telling us some details of his body. Is he muscular, broad shouldered? Are his eyes really that blue? etc