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by Aline

person ann
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally you updated!!!!!! very good story nicely written
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:)
person Jen
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for updating...so when you gonna update again?

This is definitely starting to get more intense. I love what you've done with the two youngest Weasley's. And the thing is I can actually pictuare canon Ron going to that extreme (if the books weren't aimed for a pre-teen readership). And Ginny. God!! What a major bitch!! Who needs enemies with friends like her?

I really think it is time for people to start finding out about Hermione and Draco's relationship. Perhaps the revelation to Ron could result in a trip to the insane ward of St Mungo's for him. Sorry but I really can't stand Ron, So more Ron bashing please :)

I want to know what you have planned for the junior uninitiated Death Eater's still at Hogwarts. They could provide some interesting plot developments. Are you going to continue on and have a chapter involving the ball Draco and Hermione were supposed to dance at?

Something else just occured to me... They're attempting to bait Voldemort into attacking the school. It's war and things go wrong, both Draco and Hermione are going to be in some serious danger, especially if Draco has to reveal his alliance to the light in order for it to be effective. Therefore i conclude that there's a chance one of them might die... wouldn't it be an idea to have them married off to each other before any battles are fought, just on the off chance that if Draco snuffs it Hermione won't lose the baby to still birth. Besides imagine if Ron found out about them after they were irrefuteabley married. (Yeah evil thought I know)

Just in case you haven't got the picture yet... I really enjoy reading this fic and the above rant is my way of letting you know i'm liking your writing. Hey maybe i even gave you a plot bunny or two.

neway, please write more very soon. :)
person pinkwands
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! totally loving this fic! it is fantastic!!! I love how they are so good yet so bad for each other at the same time, and you completely got rons character a complete prat lol more!!!!
person Jen
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got one thing to say... BLOODY WELL UPDATE SOOOOOON please?

I want to know what happens, will Ron and Ginny find out about Draco and Hermione's relationship? Will Harry get together with that Slytherin bird?

Will Hermione find out how much of a bitch Ginny actually is (Cos ur friends just don't say that shit about you behind your back) ??

Are the rest of the Weasley's going to be as obsessive about Hermione being with Ron as the youngest two are? Does Harry really support her decision to be with Draco and is he going to find out about the baby? Are they going to get married, will they dance together at the ball despite everything that's going on.

Will Harry figure out that Parvati really can't be trusted?

Come on end my suspense...please?
person Laurence
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, and I REALLY hope that you're gonna continue it. I hope that you're not finish with this. Good Job! Continue!
person Sarah
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying here, I really wish you update and add more to this story. It's one of the best I've found on aff and has become one of my favorites. I'm beggin you, please don't forget about it.
person nina
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm impressed, again wow
i love this fic, im new to the fic world so i've been reading a few and some of them aren't all that great but i have admit that yours is really good
looking foward to the next chap
keep up the good work
person mid-summer nights
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! i love it!!! i couldn't stop reading and i must read some more!
person Jessica
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story! I hope you update soon. Great job.