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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thgis story was edited wrong... retry but it's great otherwise
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The fanfic is brilliantly written with a great plot. Maybe a slave bond could be formed between lupin and harry and snape. Snape as the subbmissive slave and harry and lupin as the masters. Please update soon I know my idea is bad and am sure you can come up with a better one but hey! Thanks 10/10
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
snape can be broken and harry helps him by taking controll over the hole thing. snape has been used and stuff by voldir and now does not know what to do. dumbles puts harry in charge of snape and things go from there.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man! this story is the best. i so can't wait til you put up more chapters. when i was reading it for the first time i could not get enough of it. i love harry and snape stories. i love it! and i agree with anna about harry and remus fight on who should get snape. i have so much more ideas about this story and i am so excited.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uuuuummmmmm.. excellent story! i love it[part from poor sevie] and i have a bit of an idea... i just figure its best not to post it on review, but if you do plan on continuing this[or trying, and i hope you do!] i could email you. incase you cant read mine above, its burnt-wristbands@hotmail.com.. love the way its going tho, plz keep up the great work
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm . . . Maybe there should be some type of Remus/Harry rivalry over who gets to date Snape? :)
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh PLEASE make it harry/severus!! That's the reason I'm reading it!! THey're my favorite pairing!! PLEASE!!!! I love the fic, just don't ruin it now!! AHH!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please keep up with the story.
Ideas: I love sev/harry but you could do a tri match with Lupin, Harry and Sev. You know the power of the three.
Old voldy will not be very happy that his toy is gone. Remus could provide the protection of his wolf self toward his pack in the relationship as far as advanced ADA and Harry could provide the love that will allow Sev to live through this ordeal. Sev could remember the help that Remus gave him after Sirus raped him.
I think that Harry, Genny and Hermonie could request a change of House due to the disrespect they observes toward the returned and (a hopefully temporarly) emotionally damaged Sev.
Slytheran Harry and the Girls. Yeah. Genny was posessed by Voldy after all. Ron is such a Git.
You could also set up a confrontation of the Deatheater Children, who love their head of house, and their Familys as the learn, through their Fathers boasts, what truely happened to Sev. They could firmly step into the light and and support the lovers. How about a side paring of Genny and Draco.
Sev could slowly regain his awareness but he possible could begin a self harming mind frame. After all He is carring the monster of voldy in his magically created womb. High Angst potential
Since Harry has experenced Sev's memories he could take Sev back into the memories and begin to rebuild his shattered mind.
A Plot twist could be that due to the conection between Harry and Tom that the baby could magically become Harry's throuth the love and admiration that Harry has developed for Severus. "The Power Voldy knows not."
I hope one or more of these ideas help you.
Terri
Ideas: I love sev/harry but you could do a tri match with Lupin, Harry and Sev. You know the power of the three.
Old voldy will not be very happy that his toy is gone. Remus could provide the protection of his wolf self toward his pack in the relationship as far as advanced ADA and Harry could provide the love that will allow Sev to live through this ordeal. Sev could remember the help that Remus gave him after Sirus raped him.
I think that Harry, Genny and Hermonie could request a change of House due to the disrespect they observes toward the returned and (a hopefully temporarly) emotionally damaged Sev.
Slytheran Harry and the Girls. Yeah. Genny was posessed by Voldy after all. Ron is such a Git.
You could also set up a confrontation of the Deatheater Children, who love their head of house, and their Familys as the learn, through their Fathers boasts, what truely happened to Sev. They could firmly step into the light and and support the lovers. How about a side paring of Genny and Draco.
Sev could slowly regain his awareness but he possible could begin a self harming mind frame. After all He is carring the monster of voldy in his magically created womb. High Angst potential
Since Harry has experenced Sev's memories he could take Sev back into the memories and begin to rebuild his shattered mind.
A Plot twist could be that due to the conection between Harry and Tom that the baby could magically become Harry's throuth the love and admiration that Harry has developed for Severus. "The Power Voldy knows not."
I hope one or more of these ideas help you.
Terri
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and as for ideas ummmmm..........harry can help snape fix his mind ? like umm talk to him in the infermary (sp?) and stuff like that? I`m having a bad spelling day ^^ I like snarry better but its really your call
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:3 next time you\'re online when I am, I\'m SO bombarding you with ideas *brain is practically vibrating with plot bunnies* XD