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for Seduction of the Snake God

by belladonnacordial

person Angie/Les
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... this story sounds interesting so far. Please continue.
person antipyro
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love antiquities!

This is off to a very good start. It\'s already got mystery, intrigue, humour, angst, hope and sex already mentioned. You\'ve described the scenes very well with respect to what\'s going on, who\'s dead, who\'s not and some reasons. It really helps to know where you\'re coming from.

Your style is very fluid and easily read and absorbed.

Now, all you have to do is write more, faster and post it! That\'s all!!! *snickers*
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Amazing Start! Snape killing Voldemort, and their connection ... and then Harry going to look for him. I just love it so far! Terribly sad about how many people died, especially most of the Weasleys. The little part about Lucius was cute too, I love it when Lucius is the sneaky prick, evil little prick that he is.

Cant wait for the next chapter! Loved the first chapter! * Gives you loads of chocolate frogs in thanks *

- Jessica
person Kateri
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice begning. Very good writting, because event though there wasn\'t a lick of sex this story still felt really hot. Eager for more chapters
person janas
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks way more serious then most stuff I read here. Hope you get to the sex real soon ( ^ ;
person Chermoya
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. Looks like this is going to be good.