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for Seduction of the Snake God

by belladonnacordial

schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg ... i was so ready to strangle you. lol wow i was like holding my breath that whole chapter, ooh loved it by the way! Ending was kinda funny

Cant wait for the next update... should make to be another lovely chapter Love it! - Jessica
person Angie/les
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was SWEET!!! Ok lucius deserves to die in every fic. I just think he sucks. Well update soon.
person antipyro
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was quite good. I\'m glad that if Harry didn\'t know what exactly was going on, that he played along, knowing that Severus wouldn\'t hurt him or have him hurt by Lucius.

I must brush up on my Egyptian mythology to try and keep up with you on this fic. I find it fascinating, even if it may be made up, but I doubt that.

I really like the poems you start out with on every chapter. They set the mood up quite nicely.

I hope you keep this fic going for a long time, it just keeps getting better and better.

Thanks, and post soon.
person Britomartis
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"I was in a foul mood long before you were born.\" I love it! keep up the great work, and please email when you update!

~Bri
person antipyro
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol - \"I was in a foul mood before you were born\" - LMAO!!!!

Your banter between the two was awesome! nevermind the Veritaserum babbling. I\'m sure the effects of which only serve to tell all there is about what you\'re talking about. Very funny, indeed. lol

So, it seems that Severus is fairly certain of Harry\'s intentions, will he acquiese? I hope so, otherwise your story might have to end and it\'s toooo good for that.

Loved the risks of inflicting Light charms, \'breathing\'! lol

Great chapter, please post more soon.
person Rebecca R
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love where this is leading pleas update as soon as posssible!
person icestar
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:P twenty qyestions time anyone?

lovely story. ^_^ :thumbs up:
person swansee
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun story but please can they get to the shagging soon?
person Angie/Les`
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I loved the throwing through a wall bits. brutal force can be wuite funny at times. Well update soon. Puhlease. Come on get to that computer. Wow that was odd....
person antipyro
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love the snarky retorts you filled chapter 2 with, it\'s awesome. I was hoping Harry would kiss Severus to show him how sincere he was, to show him why....Ooh, is that in the next chapter?? Shhhhhhhhh, I won\'t tell.

So why is Severus hiding, will we find out in the next chapter? That seems to be the key here, isn\'t it?

Loved the banter, yes, I miss it too. Please keep it up.

....and post the next chapter soon, please.