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person Katie K
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Omg I love this. Poison Ivy... hehehe poor snape :P *adds story to favourites* *realizes she has to sign in* DAMN! :-P Ah well, this story is worth it :-)
person phantomcomplex
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! This is so fantastic! I can\'t even tell you how many times I just had to stop reading, look away, and breathe for lack of oxygen. I read the whole thing in one, see, and I just have to give you snaps for how well the story is progressing. Most fics like this are just funny one-shots where you feel like the author is just writing totally random shit that never goes anywhere, but this is a real story! I love the format, this idea is so perfect! Write more really soon, or I\'ll set my rabid flying monkey on you. But in the mean time, I give you lots of cookie dough and corn, because I heard it makes people write faster.
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person antipyro
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Sorry about the swearing in front of a....You\'re how Old???? I don\'t want to contribute to the deliquency of a minor but your story is terrific, HA HA HA, hitting a moose with a stone....HA HA HA HA! I\'m glad this story isn\'t based on reality. (I love it anyways, don\'t even think of stopping it!!!!)

Glad the book is spelled to be long. I find it really funny that they both get to read each other\'s writings/thoughts in the book, I guess that\'s how the story progresses - Duh!!! Excellent theory and rationale, anyways.

I\'m glad Harry\'s wand shows up, lol \"The Snitch\" lol

Can\'t wait for the surprise.....I guess Harry can\'t do wandless magic, eh?

Jademerald is very generous with her gifts of sugar quills, cookies and chocolate, so consider a virtual massage for your sore hands for all the typing a gift from me.

Love it how you write Harry\'s reactions to his perceived thoughts from Severus and it was soooo touching to read how Harry watched as Severus slept - just darling.

Tell Shane to finish quickly, this Canadian gal is rather impatient right now, knowing other chapters have already been written.

Many thanks and post soon.
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods this fic is hysterical, Potter\'s Moose , really? Goodness that was funny.

Loved the latest installment, its so cute how they share there journal. Lol, a diary! ha goodness sorry, just a thought. Its cute how they like keep righting how much they like eachothers hands/eyes, or how harry thinks he \'could\' be crushing on snape, when they know the other person is going to read it. Adorable.

Ooh and I love how Harry keeps referring to Lucius having some sort of a relationship with Sev, is very funny.

Lovely chapter!!! * Hands over some brownies and chocolate chip cookies * (( lol, change of gift sweets )) Love it!! - Jessica
person Katie K
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love this story sooo much! Please update soon! Please please please! (hehe I sound like a child when I\'m all excited :-P)
person antipyro
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That is the most hilarious thing I\'ve read since a story about Snape giving a sex ed class. (c/o grindylowe@yahoo.com called \"The Lecture\" you can find it at http;//www.geocities.com/grindylowe/sexed.html?200512 sorry, don\'t know how to make a link) You are totally brilliant, bored, NOT!

...and the fact that it\'s the Canadian winter, HA! Must be somewhere in Manitoba or Northern Ontario somewhere. Where do they find berries in the snow? Must do some research on winter berries and inebriating properties. Are you Canadian? I hope so, this is just great writing.

I love the fact that they\'re sharing the same book, I hope it has lots of pages and they write small. I would hate that they run out of paper.

The two different perspectives are typical and totally justifiable by each, it\'s just that Harry always seems on the defensive side. Maybe you could fix that??? Just a little.

O.k., now why wouldn\'t Harry\'s wand float? I guess it\'s stuck in the \"airplane\" somewhere. I hope the currents in the lake will loosen it up and have it float to the surface, just in time for......something.....Hmmmmm..... (Is that enough of a plot bunny for you??)

I like that fact that you\'re keeping this a light humour and not a dark and dreary fight for survival sort of thing, although Snape would think otherwise - lol.

Please, Please, Please keep writing this fic. The letter format is terrific. You really should be bored more often if this is the result. I\'ve noticed that reviews run less than 10% in these fics, so don\'t get dismayed. If people are reading it, then it\'s worth it, but hey, it\'s your decision -------- but don\'t stop, PLEASE???????

Write more and post soon, Thank you.
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! Haha his broomstick, holy crap *snickers wildly* That was hillarious! Ooh I love it, please update soon!

Love it!! * More lemon drops for the two of you ... and chocolate frogs * XD Loved it!! - Jessica
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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... holy crap.

That was really funny, cant tell you how many times I cracked up over the little note to self things. *thwumps head against keyboard laughing*

** lemon drops and sugar quills to persuade you to write another chapter ** lol really like it! - Jess