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These are a great chain of stories.  I’m a little surprised that with Harry and Hermione’s relationship that they didn’t end up together, but you provided some good reasons for that.  I like the idea of filling in with episodes from the past and look forward to more.  I wonder if Tom’s possession caused Ginny to do anything and would love to see what happened with Fleur.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

perfection.
I hope there more chapters. maybe molly and fluer can get involved?
anyways im sure whatever u come up with will be good.

Hi! So great to see this story updated again! I agree the last chapter really did have a "clunky ending" to it. It seems to have gone from a 3some/moresome to a Harry/Ginny story. Totally changed the whole flow of the story. I honestly don't care who Harry is with, but it seems to lose a bit of the fun to go from 4-5 girls down to 1. So many smutty possibilities are lost. If that is how you really wanted the plot to change, then I won't argue about it. Just remember the fun in fanfics is that you don't have to make the story match how the real books end. If you want him to end with 5 girlfriends/wives, then you CAN! :-) But if you WANT him to end with Ginny only, then of course you can do that too. Just do what YOU want, not what I want, or what JKR ALREADY did. :-)

Im sorry but you should have stayed with Day to day things with Harry this just looks like a bad ending

This Fic kicks ass.

Sweet.

Good story

this story/giant sex sence (sp) is SO wrong and kinky that it KICKS ASS, get the next chappy up lol

update update update ant doo also susan bonen ant flear or a veela or both

It is a nice story, but it is in the wrong section! You\'ve put this in the Harry/Hermione section and your story is Harry/Multi. Please move your story!