rate_review Reviews

Very fast wedding! This fic is so cool! I can\'t wait for more!!

Awwwww! What a sweet chapter! I love this story esp. because it is a Lucius/Harry fic. I haven\'t seen too many of those kinds of stories so it\'s always a treat to read them! Lucius is soooooo sexy!

Update soon

For a start, I adore the story. Its really good. BUT! You knew that was coming
didn\'t you......You desperately need a good beta.


I am dreadfully Dyslexic, my wonderful beta, asked me if I wanted to place my story in the present
tense, or the past tense. I had not got a clue what she meant, however, after reading your work,
now I know.

One minute you are talking about what is happening, next your story goes into a past mode, where you state I think I love him
when in the previous sentence you\'ve got him being drawn to another.

I never ever, thought I would say this, but I will!!!! YOU NEED A GOOD BETA, ONE WHO WILL SHOW YOU WHERE YOU ARE GOING
WRONG, NORMALLY THEY PUT THE\'RE CORRECTIONS IN RED. I\'VE LEARNT TO LISTEN TO MY BETA, AND NORMALLY GO, WITH THE WAY SHE
HAS CORRECTED IT.

I think your story deserves to show it at it\'s best. Believe me, the plot is really that good. Help it.

Best wishes, Donavon,

I must say I laughed out loud when Harry wrote on the voodoo doll. Hilarious. Such a good fic. I read the whole thing this evening, and now I can\'t wait for more.

Heh. That was cool. I liked the Draco/Severus part. Thanks. :) Also, thanks for putting thought into your plot. I dig magickal theory, and you\'ve done a fine job incorporating it into this fic. Good job!

Great Chapter! Update soon

I liked that. And though I generally don\'t make requests (it\'s YOUR story, after all), I\'ve got to say that I\'ve always been something of a closet Draco/Snape fan. If you\'re up to it, please go into more with this pairing. I like it in this capacity. Good job!

Sexy chapter! Want more!!

i really like your story. all of them actually. so is their any chance that they will all get together for a little fun? from the way the other\'s are acting, harry might have to \'convince\' draco to help him get sev and lucius drunk. or not, i could just keep fantasizing about it, lol.

I really really like this story, please continue with it. I\'m curious as to what Harry will do about Lord Voldemort.