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July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't make him a little brother and step father... But a step-son and step-father.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story liked it alot.
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, a little cheesy at times but very cute. Good Job
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I read this years ago and I think I never reviewed. Just read it again and I must say it's still brilliant!
The 'Harry Potter Factor' and that idea with the voodoo doll, not to mention that odd family of Snape&Draco, Harry&Lucius - extremely funny! ^^
- Dime
I read this years ago and I think I never reviewed. Just read it again and I must say it's still brilliant!
The 'Harry Potter Factor' and that idea with the voodoo doll, not to mention that odd family of Snape&Draco, Harry&Lucius - extremely funny! ^^
- Dime
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story is there going to be a squeal.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 Interesting conversations here although some of the dialogue seems out of character. I can't imagine Lucius Malfoy using words like "Geez" and "Hey." Having him blush and Severus laugh are also rather OC. Those are definitely mistakes. Otherwise a serviceable chapter.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, a little simplified at the beginning, but always funny, and overall quite enjoyable. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... fantastic story... really beautiful. =D
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really good.