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December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This hasn't been updated in several years. Are you ever going to finish it? Very interesting story and it's a shame to abandon it.
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting twist. Thanks for sharing!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you mentioned that the first 8 chapters belong to becca , but you only have 4 posted do you have the rest posted somewhere else?
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is that a beginning of a Hurt/Comfort theme I sense? I can really connect with that kind of story. I hope you haven't abandoned it.. It would really be interesting to see how people go about making Harry trust them again. To experience his fear and his joy. There hasnt been much of the latter, but the former there has been plenty (not that i'm complaining) and I think you express it very well. Especially in that last paragraph with Daemon;
"I will not let him trust, until I trust, not let him speak or thouch or love or cry with anyone, until I trust them."
"I will not let him trust, until I trust, not let him speak or thouch or love or cry with anyone, until I trust them."
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One advantage I feel that this fic have, is that it lets you experience very intimately what it is that makes Harry loose his trust. Some authors tend to just summarize it in a couple of paragraphs or so, but you do it in several chapter. I think it makes it easier to
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just one more thing... :P
I think it's clever that Snape seems to trust Harry, if he is going to help him. It wouldn't make sense otherwise; sort of like a parent who tells the child to eat vegetables but doesn't eat them himself. Someone in a relationship should be confident, or else there is bound to be trouble...
I feel like quoting Moulain Rouge "Without trust, there can be no love."
I think it's clever that Snape seems to trust Harry, if he is going to help him. It wouldn't make sense otherwise; sort of like a parent who tells the child to eat vegetables but doesn't eat them himself. Someone in a relationship should be confident, or else there is bound to be trouble...
I feel like quoting Moulain Rouge "Without trust, there can be no love."
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
story seems great, but there's only 4 chapters. I also can't find rest elsewhere =( ['the silver snitch' also 4 chap's] and I really want to know what happens later XDD will there be any continuation ??? pretty pliiis ;>>>
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first four chapters and I thing you should write some more. This is so exceting story. I want more. Please give my more *poppyeyes
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so very, very good. You must update. I don't know if I could bear it if you didn't continue this.