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for Contretemp

by xSanityx

person subjunctivity
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so funny. You\'ve written it well so far.
I hope you make it through the issues that many MPreg writers have. Good luck!
I shall return to this one. ^^
person Ash
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha. I loved it. Great job. Can\'t wait for an update.
person Katie K
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! Very good! I love this story! And I only found one error (not that I was really looking but anyway), so well done! (it\'s spelt unconscious... no e on the end). Please update soon!
person Kadie
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. Write more
person Rachel
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahhahaa.... sorry, I know that I should give a serious review but... hahahahahahahahhahahaha

Snape fell on his face hahhahahahahahhahahahahahaha he fainted hahahahahahahahhahahahah

Oh, I\'m better now (wipes tear from eye), great start. Can\'t wait for more.
person Aray
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great
now they have to just bond and get married