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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better. I really do love this story. I am craving more lol. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH, YES! this is an excellent story. I agree with all the previous reviews (no bad ones I hope) about the roles you\'ve put the characters in. You\'ve managed to see into them and figure out exactly what they\'d do next.
I like Harry\'s story about the adverse effects of the potion on his body, but I don\'t think that will work for long. I hope he\'s good with glamours, notice-me-not or concealing charms. I guess it\'s hard not to notice someone throwing up all over the place. lol
I\'d like to ask if Malfoy has another intent in this story, it seems he has a personal interest somehow. If this is part of the story, don\'t tell me here, I\'ll wait and read it. ...But a clue would be good. ^_~
Love it, write more and post soon.
I did notice some spelling mistakes or typos, but I think a reviewer is already on that. It doesn\'t really take away from the story. You said you wanted to know.
I like Harry\'s story about the adverse effects of the potion on his body, but I don\'t think that will work for long. I hope he\'s good with glamours, notice-me-not or concealing charms. I guess it\'s hard not to notice someone throwing up all over the place. lol
I\'d like to ask if Malfoy has another intent in this story, it seems he has a personal interest somehow. If this is part of the story, don\'t tell me here, I\'ll wait and read it. ...But a clue would be good. ^_~
Love it, write more and post soon.
I did notice some spelling mistakes or typos, but I think a reviewer is already on that. It doesn\'t really take away from the story. You said you wanted to know.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously beginning to wonder about people. It is a perfectly natural function of the famale to pregnant and yet I find most people consider the norm to become abnormally bloated until they can\'t walk within weeks of becomeing pregnant and when they aren\'t sicking up everywhere they are eating combinations of food only made possible by licking the inside of the garbage disposal. Why? I really don\'t understand. Is it just plot filler or do humans really act like this? I am not even flaming you- you have a good solid story, it is just this one cliche that leaves me bewildered. Could you please help?
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Harry. Gods Malfoy can be such a prick. Harry should see Madame Pomphery about his nausea. I wonder who will find out first , about the baby I mean....
I love it so far! Sev and Harry are so sweet to eachother. - Jessica *Gives you loads of lemondrops and pleads for you you update soon
I love it so far! Sev and Harry are so sweet to eachother. - Jessica *Gives you loads of lemondrops and pleads for you you update soon
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Malfoy. Death to him for almost killing Harry\'s baby! Grrr!
Please continue working on this.
Thank you.
Please continue working on this.
Thank you.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil author! How can you end it there????? What will Severus do to Draco? Are Harry and the baby fine? Thanx for updating though!! :)
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At this rate it won\'t be a secret much longer. Loving it!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy! Thank God for Severus arriving at that moment! I love this story! And I didn\'t find any mistakes, so well done! :-) *hands you promised cookies*
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is lovely ! I love it from here !!
One thing though, typical, I don\'t know why each time Harry is pregnant in some fic, the Headmaster and cie always learn the news before Harry. Isn\'t he suppose to learn about it before everyone? And then chose if he wants to tell to anybody else?
Anyway, I love you story, it is just one thing I noticed after reading a lot of fic containing a pregnant Harry.
One thing though, typical, I don\'t know why each time Harry is pregnant in some fic, the Headmaster and cie always learn the news before Harry. Isn\'t he suppose to learn about it before everyone? And then chose if he wants to tell to anybody else?
Anyway, I love you story, it is just one thing I noticed after reading a lot of fic containing a pregnant Harry.