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by Fervesco

person Jon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful last sentence! Please don\'t leave it there.........
person rboothe
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written ... I love it. Out of time, will have to finish reading later, but it certainly captivates you!
person rboothe
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delightful and beautifully written!!!
person gypsy
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well done. plz write more. (if not a continuation to this one, then another)
-___^v
person sarahayn(too lazy to log in)
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good. want more. ~laterz~
person June
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - mmmmm, I love this fic .... poor Severus trying to stay in control of the situation, and a smart Hermione (yay!) who sees through the protective shields. I do hope she\'s taking a contraceptive, and that they find some time away from Harry, Ron, etc. Besides, this next time is HIS turn to host! Heh-heh, looking forward to the next chapter.
person Susan
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWW. I love his inner conflict. \"Must be a bastard, must be a bastard\" seems like a little mantra that he keeps repeating and yet he keeps caving in. LMAO. And she sees right through him. The last lines were just adorable. I am glad that he stayed. Well done!! :)
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Open wide, one big fat review full of chocolatey goodness coming up! Wow how wonderfull this is!!! Fantastic writing I love how you\'ve written him. It make me want to chain him up and keep him as my pet even more!!! is that possible? lol Keep going please if only to allow me to keep what little sanity I have left. You are very talented! *lines up cheerleaders and big brass band* Can\'t wait for the next update. Hope it will be soon. :) xXx
person Catpower
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Snape is such a disturbed bastard. Hermione is unnecessarily kind and nice to him - but that\'s what a lot of women are like when confronted with bastards - trouble is, they are often really sexy. I\'m enjoying your writing style.
person juliet
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this!! Please please please continue. I love angsty Snape - don\'t you dare make him fluffy!