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June 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM
The story was very good. Good writing, I love the connection between Harry and Hermione.
A bit mixed up with the perspective at the end, but otherwise great job!
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June 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make a sequel to this! I want to see what happens to Harry and Hermione, I ship them so much!
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"No words were spoken"
If only it would've been as well..
The whole story was OOC and terribly cliche at points.
You're not that bad at writing, but honestly, you're not doing this wonderful universe and these wonderful characters justice.
I'm sorry.
If only it would've been as well..
The whole story was OOC and terribly cliche at points.
You're not that bad at writing, but honestly, you're not doing this wonderful universe and these wonderful characters justice.
I'm sorry.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O GOD MAKE A SEQUAL!! PLEASE MAKE A FUCKING SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue make them marry! or better yet a wilde orgy!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude that was freakin awesome!!!!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg YUCK
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"his back and wouldn\'t let me out.\" Hahahaha... nice slip up.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I want you to keep writing- its a really really good story- great even! And it\'s really nasty- just the way I love it! Though the one thing I didn\'t like about the story was all the details of Hermione\'s pain of losing her cherry- Its made me scared for when I lose it! But its still great- please continue- you\'re a great writer!
Have a great day!
Have a great day!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, ya could easily turn this into a multi-chaptered story, add in some of Hermione\'s friends or even older sister.
Anyways, hope ya continue the fic. There aren\'t many Harry/Hermione fics on here, most of them have another guy in or something of the like which im not into.
SEE YA..
Anyways, hope ya continue the fic. There aren\'t many Harry/Hermione fics on here, most of them have another guy in or something of the like which im not into.
SEE YA..