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for Especially Our Enemies

by sboyle

person chic
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

how could you???!!! i adore the story so very much, i adore the storyline, i adore the subtleness, i adore the characterizations!!! all i want is for ron and draco to be happy together, maybe not forever but for good. i am sorry for ron.

thank you very much for your story. i am a hopeless ron lover, a diehard draco/ron, harry/ron shipper too!!! haven\'t read such a wonderful fanfic in a while!!! thanks. will u write a happy ending draco/ron or harry/ron pls?
person Kate
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just sat and read all 14 chapters and I love it so much I want to cry! I love how you have made both Ron and Draco adult without losing their sense of self and you didn\'t really change them that much. Also the way you can tell the war changed them. I love where it is going, and since I am really a Ron/Harry shipper I love the added feeling that Ron had for Harry before her died. Cheers!
person Sachi
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O...M...G...I LOVE it! I can\'t wait til you update^^. This is a great story, write more please!
person viu
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*do a happy dance* I \'m glad this has been updated. I also didn\'t see mpeg could work on this, Ron seemed too much like an old man. ( sorry, ron)
person Aunt Bijou
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable and lovely. I like the tension between Ron and Draco. For a few minutes there, in Chappie 11, I thought Neville\'s wife was going to ask Ron to impregnate Neville! Whew! What a plot twist THAT would have been! Please continue, can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Donau
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I hope you will update soon.
Your writing style is very interesting, it makes the story quite mysterious.
Cheers
person Aunt Bijou
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So...... is Ron preggers? And Malfoy has pancreatic cancer?? I\'m loving this story, there aren\'t enough Ron/Draco stories out there. I\'m curious, and can\'t wait for the next installment!
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Draco/Ron happens to be my favorite pairing though good fiction is hard to find. I am, however, a bit disappointed that your story seems to be, in several places, alot like one I am writing at the moment but it\'s not so close that I feel angry.

I love this story, so far, and hope you continue it soon een though I know life can stand in the way of updating our stories.

Very well written.
person Eowynselixure
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!! you had BETTER update soon!!!

*Eowyns elixure
person viu
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story was dark and stunning. Although Draco and Ron were out of characters, the craziness of Draco and confusion of Ron were well described. I love the story. I can\'t wait longer for the next chapter.