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for Hogwarts Express

by Closet

person PotionsMistressNix
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is so original!!! I adore you for coming up with this and then having the skill to create it in writing!!! I cannot wait to read more! However I still am trying to figure out if you believe the all the worlds should be Harry/Draco or if it is normal for some worlds to have different pairings for the two. I guess I\'ll wait to see if Alpha Harry and Alpha Draco get together...

Which Harry died??? It was so appalling but I loved your description!!
person blackwidow10
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they finally figured it out!! ^_^ wow...its kind of hard to imagine a world without a harry potter...or one without a draco malfoy, for that matter. anywayz, ur story is still awesome! ^_^ im trying very hard not to hate the snape in ur story, seeing as he hasnt done anything, like kill someone... *mutters darkly* by the way...i LOVED ur shakespeare references! ^_^
person Mishi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! YAY! Mad-man Draco has a Harry! Now...whose Harry died!?! Tell me woman!
Good story by the way ^_^ Such an awesome plotline and very well written.
person Mishi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been checking, rechecking, and then double rechecking your story today! I can never get enough! The mystery behind the dead Potter has driven me stir-crazy. I must know what happens next! Update soon please! Marvelous fic!
person Shame Ness
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww so your attracted to me how sweet! Well Im so upset I got up this morning at 7:00 to read your new chapter and there wasn\'t one I was so heartbroken cuz well I had to leave for the entire day or at least until 2 and have to leave again at 4 stupid work. Well hopefully I can read the nest chapter soon......hint, hint.

XOXOXO
Plus all the chocolate you could want!
person Alexa
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it helped. Thanks! :-)
Now, in the world without Harry Potter, I\'m guessing there is no Neville either? I would assume there would be at least 3 possibilities: A) 1-Harry, 0-Neville B) 0-Harry, 1-Neville C) 0-Harry, 0-Neville. If the only worls without Harry is the world where V. won, there is just option C. Why?
And why did Draconius decide that he loved Harry when he saw him in other worlds? Seeing and loving aren\'t nessesarily connected.
P.S.: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the story!!! :-)
person EternalDemise
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You, my friend, are evil.
You just left it there..
That was cruel.

Can\'t wait for more =)

How did you come up with something like this?!
You must have one hell of an imagination.

I love it!
person Eowynselixure
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent please continue!!!

*Eowyns elixure
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVIN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Eowyns elixure
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He took them? Oh my! I can\'t wait for chapter 35! Oh this is fantastic!