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for Hogwarts Express

by Closet

person MornMeril
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE this story! the idea is FABULOUS, and your style of writing simply GREAT.

update soon please, or i\'ll die a slow painful death :D !

cheers
person Shame Ness
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do so wish I could get the Half Blood Prince, but as of now I will not have the money, cuz I have those stupid things called bills too pay so I have to wait until my next pay-check, or I would be doing the exact same thing as you! Great Chappy, too!
person acr
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. I can\'t wait to see what happened with Draconis in his time. BTW, when are we going to see more of the Harry when Neville is the BWL?
person Glue Project`
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...you left it off THERE?! (cries) I failed for NanoWriMo. (sighs) \'Neways...(looks around) I\'m draging my gnadmother down to Walden Books tonight. I\'ve had my copy reserved for at least two months. (grins) This book is going to be awesome. (glomps you) And you type so fast! I wonder how many more chapters there are. I\'d guess quite a few...I wonder if Harry-Harry is going to meet Slytherin-Harry and NotHero-Harry. (snickers) That\'s be fun, \'specailly with Slytherin-Harry.
person DBZVelena
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil to stop there right before HBP comes out.
Well, I hope it will inspire you to write lots and lots more.
I love your track changes.
Its such a unique story!
person tp
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is great. it is one of the most unique ideas i\'ve ever read, very kool. i can\'t wait to read more!! do you have a list for letting readers know you update?
person acr
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. Please continue.
person lje
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Keep up the great work!!!
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ayy I LIKE chapter 20 but the first three or four chapters have uploaded wrong I think. PLEASE correct it! Oh dear I feel so sorry for alternate Draco he was so worried about Harry! Awww and then Harry didn\'t even want to be near him! Awww.

Love it!

*Eowyns elixure
person Glue Project
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a really good story. I guess I\'ll just have to sit here until the rest of the chapters are posted. (sits) ... (hums) ... (...) ...helllo?... (pouts) Its was so confusiong at first, but cool in its complexety. I am quite impressed at teh preparation you must have put into this. (And I have a big feeling that alpha(?) Harry-Draco are the closest to making Draconis happy, ne?)