rate_review Reviews

Loved every minute!!

I just have to leave a comment here. I remember reading some of this story back a long long time ago and I somehow stumbled across it now almost ten years later (after not reading fanfic in ages), re reading at such an older age I appreciate it so much more. It is/was amazing, I hope you've considered writing an actual book, because this one had me hanging on every chapter! I read it all in one day, haha. Amazing, bit sad I can't find the sequel, but I'm completely satisfied and happy after reading this! Honestly so well written. Thank you!

This was really amazing. Very well written, very well thought-out, well-planned, and interesting. A little unpredictable, too, which is good.

Kind of mind-blowing.

omg, this was such an awesome story! such a great concept and you managed to handle all of the differences/similarities really well. so sad about that one harry though :( and i loved the meeting of all the snapes at the end, that was so funny, and the way the alpha and beta pairs kept growing closer as they worked to resolve the mystery of draconis. excellent work :D

I didn't really get it at the beginning but i like how you brought it all together at the end. I also liked how you put in a death but then wrapped it up with a semi love twist with Draco and Ginny. All in all i really liked it and cant wait for the sequel.

wot a amazing idea of dat, it was sooooo interesting

ha, I bet the Harry in that moving Draco's universe is the Dark Lord... and when he got so angry because one of the other Dracos called Harry 'scarhead' that was because he now knows that with his insults and behaviour, he took part in driving Harry to becoming dark. Or simply because the Draco has no idea what he's doing to Harry with those insult, but moving Draco does. Possibly, moving Draco's Harry is dead; but I don't really think that's what he meant with "slightly different" when referring to the Dark Lord situation.
Anyway, very interesting, and I'm really curious what really happened!
(I'm currently at Chapter 22, by the way.)

ah, so I was totally wrong after all... doesn't matter. The poor Draco who's Harry died! I feel so sorry for him... for all those Draco's who thought it was their Harry, actually.
this idea was awesome! I've never read something as original and abstract before. Looking for the sequel now :D

OMFG, YOUR A GENIOUS, I cant spell that, but omyyyy, you wrote this fantastic story, how you wrote it, it worked, it must of been really hard but you did it, and I wasnt confused because I wrote notes about every world so I knew what was happening, Check out an example of my notes, -Track Beta - Boywholived!Nevile Sex Dreams and both hearing laughter! hhahaha xDI am so adding you to my favriote writers list :D

Seriously one of my favorite stories ever. If I were you I would consider making the characters original, develing into a background story of the new characters, and making up a world for them. Then making this into an original. (all you would have to do is make it a bit longer)