rate_review Reviews

I like this! It looks like it will be a great story. I hope you continue it and don\'t give up hope! I like your writing style.

oh, sounds interesting! continue soon!

MORE^_^\'
I love this story better too.
hope u update really soon.
best wishes to u.
michelle.

how is one to know if they like your story till they read it? Is it that you want no critical reviews at all? Personally I thought this story was a good start but I was going to suggest a beta because at times you couldnt tell on first reading if Draco was speaking or Hermione. (I had to read the speaking part through again to figure it out, for a minute there I thought the Hermione was the one who had good sex with Pansy in school, let me tell you that put a whole nuther spin on the story, lol). Personally I dont mind having someone tell me where I am making a mistake or what they honestly thought, because its how I help to improve my own writing skills. but thats just me... I know that some people are needlessly brutal, but dont throw out the baby with the bathwater.