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now you really have me troubled I dont know who I am ruting for snape or malofy I am still kind of mad at snape and it seems like malofy could love harry but iam still hoping that snape will get a clue before itsd to late and want harry back cant wait for more!!!

bah, marry lucius? God I hope that gets Sev off his bum arse to go get his harry back. lol

Love it! - Jessica

Dun Dun Dun!!!!
Ooohhh,What will Harry say?
Love, love, love!!!!
Can\'t wait for the next update!!!!
Love Angel!!!!

guud

wonderful. i loved the first book. to have and to hold. your writing style is nice to read throughout the story. good stories with good pairings and writing styles are so hard to come by. good job. this story makes me frustrated becuz there are only 3 chapters to read so far. so write more and update quickly. oh, and i hope harry never gets married to lucius, and if you dont want one of your reviewers to die of suspense (me) then you\'ll have to get snape and harry back together as soon as possible. i\'ll bite your head off if you dont. :P update soon~

Wow, this story is a twist and a turn at every corner. Being a Lucius/Harry, and a Severus/Harry fan I can tell you very directly that this story is one of the best mixes of the two. I can\'t wait to see what happens in the following chapter, and I am certainly eager to see what Harry says to the proposition. All-in-all, wonderful job. I am really enjoying your work.

~Brianna

What???!!!! You can\'t just leave it there!!! That\'s a cliff-hangar and their forbidden......huh-uh, yep, they are.....no question about it.....can\'t do it....not allowed.....

You big tease!! You make us wait for how long???, then just drop this off.......a ledge......

Please keep the inner voices, they are just darling, especially Harry\'s that sounds just like Severus - *giggles and squirms*

The trials and what happened was a great addition - really set the stage, and the media party, LOL, typical, everyone wants a piece of Harry....great writing on that one too.

So, don\'t wait so long to post the next chapter, I almost had to re-read the last chapter to remember what the story line was.

Please keep the humour going too, that\'s really funny stuff.

I love the way its going, but I feel so sorry for Severus. Mind what a wonderful Triad, they would make.
Severus, Harry and Lucius. Just thinging out loud. Thanks for a great update.

Oh My Bloody God! you just had to end it there didn\'t you!!! T-T
Well I luv the story! Even If Half Blood Prince\'s events kinda made it hard.
Please update soon! No more sad Harry and Sev plz!

Good Lord, please tell me Sev decided to talk to Harry about the script before Harry says yes to Lucius, although that may result in a catfight...... Anyway, love the fic and can\'t wait for more!!