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for To Have Not

by MontanaDan

person Findirector
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. As always.
person Kalisin
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, please update again soon.
person Lisa
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I just wanted to write and say that this is one of the best HP fics I have read; and definately the only one that has kept my complete attention, seeing as I multi task alot ^^; I am so keen to find out how Harry and Lucius\' relationship is going to be and also what Severus has up his sleeve. Actually, I am going to have to back track and read the first part, To Have and To Hold, because I just realized that I hadn\'t read it ^^;; I am sure I will find it very enjoyable as well! I can\'t wait until I read the next chapter to this fic!

Thanks for writing this for all of us HP fans!

Lisa
person Squall-sama
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is REALLY worried* You know... I can\'t stop thinking baout it--it\'s just so sad to think that, after all Severus and Harry shared and how much they really do love each other... that Harry wouldn\'t give his life to Severus first--he wouldn\'t bond with the one man who loves him more than life itself, first. And you know.... I can just see something bad coming with the sex issue between Harry and Lucious... it\'s not going to end pretty... or, well... maybe it will... who knows with you... *grins* I just feel so bad for Severus--I think he really needs to start making more of an appearance though. He\'s kinda just there in this one so far... like he\'s a forgotten character.... He really should be made a bigger part of this, since it is kind of his love that\'s on the line. >.< but hey, it\'s your decision.
person antipyro
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Harry can\'t forget Severus, not ever.....!!!!

Can he even think that he\'ll have love and trust with the Malfoy\'s??? Protection - yes; political clout - as if he needed more - yes; social grace even, yes he needed that too (he can such a klutz *snickers - in the most amicable way).

Don\'t turn Harry into a snob, please?????

If Harry can\'t have sex with anybody in the house, then can he have it elsewhere??? Like when he finally figures out that Severus\'s \"setting him free\" is to let him love who he wants, like Severus!!!!!

I\'m quite anxious to discover the twisted path that you\'ll weave to get us to the end of this. The ride should be worth it.
person Missi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Sevvie! He\'s supposed to do some damn foolish Gryffindor romantic brave gesture and win his Harry back! Thanks for updating, I can\'t wait for more!!
person FluffNutter
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this story. Just one criticism on this chapter -- and it\'s a small one -- Harry said he\'d only known he was a wizard for six hours when he met Draco. That might work with the movie version, but in the book Harry had known for a whole month because Hagrid \"rescued\" him on his birthday, July 31. Hogwarts classes resume Sept. 1. Otherwise, great story!
person Moi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write such lovely long chapters. Frankly, I confess, I have been ignoring this since it appeared, failing to associate it to its predecessor. Mea culpa. It\'s taken me all day, interrupted by real life many times, to read these first four chapters. It\'s been rather painful, actually, Severus being such an idiot. I dread what is coming, and yet I am irresistably compelled to urge you to write the next chapter.
person myniephoenix
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing as always.. worth the wait... but don\'t make us wait long... please!
person Jaima
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I am a staunch Harry/Sev fan but I really like how you have written the Malfoys.