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for To Have Not

by MontanaDan

person Cat
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I was really unsure about this fic but when I started it I found that I really liked it. Mind you there were parts I hated, Sevvie being an ass, Luc being his obnoxious self, Sevvie being an ass again... I'm kinda a Snape/Harry fan so Luc being all evil and interfering pisses me off to no end but it DOES make me love Draco. I WANT TO SEE THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!!!!! *sigh* And now it'll be in my dreams all night. I think I figured out the who Sevvie scar thing-and I do think they're related- but I'm still unsure about how the whole male fertility potion is going to play out. Hee hee, Luc let Harry top. Sorry, something about thaat just strikes me funny. Update soon!
person Abraxis
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Draco and Hermione plotting together - who can stand againstt that duo of brain power and cunning.

And I don't care how nice, helpfull and considerate Lucius is being. I'll never forgive him for the intention to slip Harry a fertility potion without his knowledge and consent. The manipulative bastard has no idea of what real love is. Severus may be being an idiot but he does really love Harry.
person SNARRY the Mohel
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape is a brick
Fart
He is the one
The only one
Who has a brick when he farts
He is a brick
Fart

"Botched Circumcision wants to meet man who likes headless cocks. Also, want to meet man with headless cock." (From a classified ad in Foreskin Magic Quarterly.)
person Chantelli
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAY! It's like a holiday miracle! More updates please! And some snarry lovin'?
person Jess
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes thank god!! Please get Harry back with Sev quickly. I'm begging here please!!Oh anyway its very good, well written.
person Sarah
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that I've read this story before, but I think you have updated since then.
I just wanted to tell you that your story is way magnifico! I absolutely love it!
Please update soon!
~rah~
person Miranda
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
person dodoododo
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE! do NOT make it a draco/hermione. i used to have a thing for that pairing.. but not any longer. XD make it the cliche ron/herm fic. (they arent married yet in this story are they?)
hurry up and put sevvy and harry together! TT_TT HURRRYYY! i know the whole point of this is seeing harry and sev suffer not being together.. but i just cant stand this torture! they must be together nowwww..

*sob*
person pwpw
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
draco/lucius may be alright.. XD it seems cool that way.. as long as it isnt a draco/hermione fic. that pairing really irks me somehow.

anyway.. update faster.
person antipyro
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter 8, I loved it. The tide is starting to turn, I can see it.....but still lots of trepidation and insecurity there.

I still have to wonder what motives Draco has, he seems too good to be true.

Have a wonderful holiday and I'll look for you next year....

Keep writing!