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Wow. much more direct than I expected. lol, it was good, can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Poor harry!!*SOBS* *sniff* Stupid Snape stupid stupid! I hope they get back together soon!! Please e-mail me when ever you update soon!!

Wow!!! Found a rec for this, but then found out that it was a sequal for another story. Read the both of them. I love it so far! I am a huge Snarry fan, by far it\'s my favorite ship, but I also like Harry/Lucius and Harry/Draco.....
I\'m looking forward to reading more of this, can\'t wait!!

Wow--I don\'t know what to say. I definitely didn\'t expect it to be like this... (And that\'s suppose to be a good thing. ^_~) It\'s just so heart-breaking and beautiful and romantic and all that other crap. >.< I do hope you plan on making Harry the... uh... \'mother\' in the relationship and that he DOESN\'T carry Lucious\' child....? I don\'t think you would--you\'re too much of a softy to do that. ^_~ ....... Right...? I feel so bad for Severus and Harry. It was so sad when Severus \'broke up\' with him. I was almost in tears. But this is coming out beautifully, your writing has imporved muchly since you first started on this series. ^_^

On that note, I was reading through To Have and To Hold, and it has some major ferked up spellings from when AFF.net wigged out, plus chapter 2 is missing a segment at the very end. I thought you\'d like to know. You could go back and fix it and that way it owuld easier for new readers to understand it better... *shrugs*

Anyway, I hope you get the next chapter out soon, you seemed to have gotten the first two out rather quickly. I\'m so excited about this one. ^_^ Finally some decent reading material again.

hey, i really adore this story, so PLEASE update again soon!

thats an amazing chapter.... really amazing.... update again soon..

I do hope that Harry doesn\'t \'fall\' for Lucius\'s tricks or lucius himself...and will someone please tell Severus to stop being a dunderhead/idiot (of course, then you wouldn\'t have a story, so maybe that should wait a few chapters). But I do think that Harry should remember that Snape said \'I love you\' and he said it when he thought Harry was asleep and wouldn\'t/couldn\'t hear. By the way, it sounded to me like Hermione was suspicous...

This is shaping up beautifully. Really enjoyed the chapter. Would really like some relief for Harry!

Very enjoyable. I do like your writing style, it\'s easy to get absorbed into the story and the inner Snape dialogue is amusing. The Possessive!Snape dynamic is a fave of mine, so I\'m anticipating a lot of fun. However, I\'m wondering if the underlying reasons for Harry and Severus\' separation truly make sense. This was the aspect that bothered me - why does Severus persist in doing what we see as stupid? Why doesn\'t Harry confront him and get some advice? Perhaps these questions will become moot. I\'m looking forward to some more insight as to their deep seated insecurities.

I want to shout from my balcony how wonderful this fic is! Great story, excellent characterization and nothing feels rushed. I will eagerly await all updates!