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Now, that was much better! You ended the chapter well! I didn\'t feel so... shorted. Heh, heh. And yes, this is worth pursuing. And honey, don\'t worry about all the hits and few reviews. Doesn\'t necessarily mean folks don\'t like it. Heck, I read a lot of stuff I can\'t always leave reviews for, mainly because my life keeps interrupting me. You know, \"Mo-o-o-m! Where\'s the milk??\" \"In the fridge where it always is, love!\" \"Honey, do we have any glue?\" \"It\'s in the closet next to the tape, the rivets, and the paper clips.\" \"Dear, the VCR isn\'t working.\" \"Hmmm, that might be because you need to turn it ON!\" Getting the picture? I review when I can, try to make mental notes to return and review later when I can\'t. Now get back to that keyboard and start typing!! Hop! Hop!

The story is a good read, but most of us just don\'t like to review. The number of hits means that people are reading. The lack of reviews means that the people who write flames feel that your story dosen\'t need flaming.

Hi

It is an amazing story, please continue

I think the story is great so far. I really liked Harry\'s personality that you have. Severus is really cool in this story too.

You know, hon, my only complaint is... you end the chapters too damn soon!!! Aaaaauuugghh!!! It\'s like watching a really great old movie on network television where they cut to a commercial right in the middle of an important bit of dialogue! Otherwise, I am intrigued, and interested, and curious. Please do continue!

It sounds interesting so far.

haha first review!! I\'m special! I like this begining Can\'t wait for more. I can\'t tell you much right now seeing as I only have one chapter but i look forward to the next