rate_review Reviews

Interesting. Bid for power. Whee!!

Great chapter

Not sure what Sharon was talking about. I agree that I don\'t like big long author\'s notes, but you don\'t have any. Huh. Strange. Anyway, good chapter. Please continue.

I love this Harry! Can\'t wait for the next chapter=)

4-5 were both good.

Sad, but very realistic. Poor harry. Where is Albus, btw?

Randy, huh? Random guy or someone in disguise?

This is a fine start to what appears to be a good story. The review thing though I find that I will probably be giving that up. One person writes this big a/n before the chapter is written and again at the end, heck some even write them within the story themselves. I\'m talking prittle prattle about how their life is going and what they have been doing and a lot of talk about when they will be updateing and why they haven\'t until now. Some of it is so personal and has nothing to do with the story. I had to wonder why and then I began to see that some authors think of us a their own little fan club. Some gush about their birthday and thanks for all the good wishes. I do know if I could ever find a plot for a story that I thought might be different then I would certainly not spend all my time writing shit when I could be using that time writing the story that I am harping about. The word prick and motherfucker was in response to my opinion. So I have come to understand that like a good little groupie I need to take time out of my reading time to build up egos since people seem to think that that is my job. The idea that if I were blown away about someones writing and gave a great review that just isnt needed anymore. You yourself have said that your chapters were quite small and if you saw in totallity how much was written you would find that we haven\'t got into the story enough to review, it\'s not your writing that is making you so that your not getting reviews. Add more and you will see.

Hmmm...Pansy and a strange guy. Yep, still curious. :) Can\'t wait to see what happens next. :)

I\'m intrigued. Looking forward to seeing what you\'re planning.