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for Two Wrongs Make a Right?

by Grittie

person The Queen of the Darkness
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...it\'s getting deep here! :) Wonderful! Can\'t wait to see what Harry and Snape have planned...not to mention Draco. Draco was very...interesting this chapter. :) Looking forward to the next.
person sharon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tis an honor to give you a review. You have shown true commitment to your story and what a story plot you have there, good for you. You don\'t fill my time about you but your story. You my dear are a class act and I will take time out of my cool life to write down your name for you my friend \"are destined for great things\" hopefully that sounded Harry Potterish ha ha.
person sharon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In respond to acr as to what I was talking about. One review that I gave concerning extensive authors notes brought me some really abusive response to my opinion. This particular author wants reviews that give extensive praise for her ego and you are not to say anything that she doesn\'t wish to hear or you get a come back from her with words such as prick and motherfucker. I can easily tell you that I have never used those words towards her when I complained about her four paragraphs, two before the story and after and this is on every page all about her, her , her and nothing about the reason that we were reading her fic, sorry that I was unclear, but its hard to clarify something so numb. It\'s not how I talk to people even if I disagree with them. Just a simple thank-you for my time and review would have been enough for me. Thanks for the listen
person anon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story
person sharon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can easily add that you give only pertinent authors notes others could learn by your writing style, have a nice day.
person Loui
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story today so I wanted to take the opportunity to say three words to you, I Am Intrigued. I like your version of Severus and Draco - I even like Pansy! - and I love Harry.

I look forward to more soon.

Peace,
Loui
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good....poor Draco and his jealousy. Are you going to have them (Harry/Draco) be equal sexually or one of them more dominant? I personally like the idea of them being equal. Taking turns with being top and bottom.
person The Queen of the Darkness
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! :) It\'s very intriguing and I\'m enjoying seeing how things are evolving. Can\'t wait to see what Harry and Sev plan out. Looking forward to the next installment. :)
person sbkar
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Viva la revolution!!!
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good! I think having Sev help Harry is good because at this point Harry obviously trusts Sev more than anyone else.