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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!! Please update.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are going to finish this one!!!!!!!
I love it so far. It seems like only an outline, but the brief scenes are like flashes of light in the dark that illuminate the story so clearly. I'm sorry that Snape loves Harry but won't take him. Then again, he seems to accept the place of fathe/mentor very well. Draco wants the place as queen (pardon my pun), and Harry will be king. You know, it would be nice, not to mention original, to see Harry take over the wizarding world and try to do the "greatest good for the greatest number" for a change. Once upon a time, that was the American way. Funny how it only can exist in fiction today.
I love it so far. It seems like only an outline, but the brief scenes are like flashes of light in the dark that illuminate the story so clearly. I'm sorry that Snape loves Harry but won't take him. Then again, he seems to accept the place of fathe/mentor very well. Draco wants the place as queen (pardon my pun), and Harry will be king. You know, it would be nice, not to mention original, to see Harry take over the wizarding world and try to do the "greatest good for the greatest number" for a change. Once upon a time, that was the American way. Funny how it only can exist in fiction today.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's what I get for reading way too late into the night. Snape is 'father/mentor.' Yes, you could laugh at me all you want.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAmn I hate cliff hangers... UPDATE SOON!!!
I love seeing Draco on pins and needles unsure about something.
I'd wish for him and Sev both to get harry but I am not the wonderful author that created this... and i have a sadistic love for threesomes...
BUT thats neither here nor there i love what you've written so far and want more!!!!!!
I love seeing Draco on pins and needles unsure about something.
I'd wish for him and Sev both to get harry but I am not the wonderful author that created this... and i have a sadistic love for threesomes...
BUT thats neither here nor there i love what you've written so far and want more!!!!!!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heheh...\"Because he will be mine.\" That\'s a great line
Please please please update! With a very looooong chapter
LOVE YA!!!
Kai
Please please please update! With a very looooong chapter
LOVE YA!!!
Kai
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I haven\'t read fan fiction in some time, and yours was one of the first I had the chance to read when I was able to. I was not disappointed. With very few grammatical and spelling errors, combined with a very original plot, I am very impressed. I wonder if all future \'dictators\' discuss things like killing people and allies as if talking about the weather? Either way, please update soon!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I can\'t wait for chapter 10! Maybe Harry could bring back Hermione. Will this work?
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good. Who is Draco kidding? He\'s jealous and he knows it.
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it does seem as if something is going on with Sev and Harry. Can we get to some Draco and Harry?
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool...can\'t wait for Draco to \"deal\" with Harry!!!