rate_review Reviews

Um, first... why do you keep changing the title of this story? Every time I think I\'ve found something new under the male/female section, it turns out to be this story. Weird... or clever if you\'re trying to up your hits, I guess.

Second, I read your author\'s notes at the beginning- responding to the \"ALL IN CAPS\" review and, well, if *I* ask you nicely to not use Marlston, will you stop? I\'m not trying to be nasty so please don\'t read this that way. I\'m just saying... Marlston is, in fact a concept that Petalsoft made up for her own story. By taking that concept without getting her approval, you\'re committing a form of plagiarism. Just something to think about. You obviously have you\'re own thing going on here. I remember there being some confusion because this story was listed as being under the name Petalsoft for a while and with you using Marlston, I\'m sure you can understand why fans of \"What a Witch Needs\" would get bent out of shape.

If you want to use the same kind of idea- Hermione was adopted and her real parents were wizards and there\'s, ya know... a house and all... go for it. But make it your own and PLEASE- make a up different name- at least. Please. You\'ve obviously put a lot of time into this story. You obviously care about it. Why not make it something completely yours?

Lila.

PS- If you *have* gotten permission from Petalsoft to use her idea- just tell the readers instead of lashing back out at reviewers who don\'t know that... Plus, fighting CAPS with CAPS never helps a situation hehehe Good Luck.

OK so I messed up anyways do you like the story with the whole kids and marrying things and also Marleston isnt happening

EVER!

Sorry

-Remuslover(author of this story)

GO TO HELL

DUDE. YOU FUCKING SUCK. STOP WRITING STORIES. AND IF YOURE GOING TO WRITE, \"IM TOO BUSY\" IS NO EXCUSE FOR NOT SPELL-CHECKING, THATS PART OF THE WHOLE THING. YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOURE TALKING ABOUT, QUIT TRYING TO BE LIKE PETALSOFT. SHE MADE UP MARLSTON FOR HER OWN STORY, SO QUIT PRETENDING. YOURE STORY IS NOWHERE GOOD AS HERS, YOU DONT NEED TO STEAL ALL THAT STUFF FROM HER LIKE \"MARLSTON\" AND THE AMOUNT OF CHAPTERS AND THE DRACO/HARRY/HERMIONE PAIRING. JUST STOP!!

I\'m so confused.... you\'re not really Petalsoft, right? Her writing is nothing like this tho you mention Marleston in your summary which I thought was just something Petalsoft created for her story \"What a Witch Needs\". I just have no idea what\'s going on here... the story, AFF listing you as Petalsoft... I thought this was written by Remuslover or something like that... random.

Snivellus? Thats what James, Remus, Sirius and Peter called him back when they were at hogwarts. If you talking about me spelling it wrong (Severus not Sevrus) its because im too busy to check it myself :)

Snape\'s first name is actually Severus not Servus or whatever you keep calling him.

Here is my final chapie naw im just playing theres about 39 more chapies where those came from!

Much better. I am impressed with this story now that I can tell what it is really about. Applause to both you and your beta. The story has much more depth now.

I love this story it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo incredible