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for Crimson Marble

by WenchBeauties

person Darcobien
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while, but I must say those last 2 chapters I just read were awesome! Summer courses really suck, but I\'m sooo glad I finally got to read the updates. Don\'t be discouraged by the lack of reviews, you guys are doing a great job and getting plenty of hits (People are just to lazy to review I think, maybe it\'s because of summer:) Please keep writting this; it is something I really look forward to reading.
person GOD!!!
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person animals can\'t fly...unless it is a liger...
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee, that was good-ish...
person lots of stuff...
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hear it\'s amazing when the famous purple stuffed worm in flapjaw space with the tuning fork does a raw blink on Hari-Kari rock!!! I need scissors!!! 61!!!
person ghettofab
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That wuz awesum! Pansy iz such a whore. She needs 2 die! Hermione shuld kik her srry ass...
person Hola...
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We were at a party
His ear lobe fell in the deep
Someone reached in and grabbed it
It was a rock lobster

We were at the beach
Everybody had matching towels
Somebody went under a dock
And there they saw a rock
It wasn\'t a rock
It was a rock lobster

Motion in the ocean
His air hose broke
Lots of trouble
Lots of bubble
He was in a jam
S\'in a giant clam

Down, down

Underneath the waves
Mermaids wavin\'
Wavin\' to mermen
Wavin\' sea fans
Sea horses sailin\'
Dolphins wailin\'

Red snappers snappin\'
Clam shells clappin\'
Muscles flexin\'
Flippers flippin\'

Down, down

Let\'s rock!

Boy\'s in bikinis
Girls in surfboards
Everybody\'s rockin\'
Everybody\'s fruggin\'

Twistin\' \'round the fire
Havin\' fun
Bakin\' potatoes
Bakin\' in the sun

Put on your noseguard
Put on the lifeguard
Pass the tanning butter

Here comes a stingray
There goes a manta-ray
In walked a jelly fish
There goes a dogfish
Chased by a catfish
In flew a sea robin
Watch out for that piranha
There goes a narwhale
HERE COMES A BIKINI WHALE!
person Kyo
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good. but, wow, I hate Pansy so much! She needs to get shot down by my mighty lightening powers...
person Latricia
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chanting* Shit! Shit! Shit! Shit! Shit! Why did she have to be there? I mean couldn\'t she go back to her own fucking bedroom.

And everything just happens to be the fault of everything hey. Maybe if she paid more attention to her boyfriend he wouldn\'t have to go looking for it somewhere else, but on second thought maybe he\'s just keeping her for appearances

All in all, it was a amazing chapter

xoxo

Latricia
person Nina
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update Soon love the story
person Super G
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! That was an unexpected ending, at least for me it was anyway. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!