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Hot and Heavy is my vote. LOL Love the story. Can\'t wait for the last chapter.

Hot and Heavy! You\'re writing is good and you\'ve already acheived the sweet part. Give Hermione what she wants so much- what they both do. Ideally in any story, characters should evolve, and if Hermione leaves this tale as chaste as she came into it, you haven\'t done your characters justice!

Hey!
I\'ve read all the way up to Chp. 4 and quite honestly the story would go well either way! Teeheehee...but I\'m a fan of the longer, novel lenght smut because it developes the characters and gives them an actual relationship before they decide to passionately fuck eachother :-).

Keep it up! It\'s a great read! :-)

Very nice story. It could go different ways from here. 1. Hermione reacts, and realizes she\'s heading into dangerous waters. 2. Hermione falls for Blaise, and then it turns out he had just bet at Slytherin he could get Granger laid. 3. Blaise eventually gets Hermione after a longer courtship, in the old fashioned way. The latter would take longer, but it would be fun.

I think it is wonderful so far. I like the idea of both \"hot and needy\" and \"chaste and soft.\" Perhaps a combination of both? Maybe even separating them to at night and then when they wake up? Up to you :O) you\'re the author

i love it i love it i love it. at first iwas kind of disapointed. but im a hopess romantic so now im really into it. as for choosing what type of ending i want... you should write both. the romantic/sweet and the sexy one.

hot and heavy. it wouldnt work any other way.

Can\'t we have all of the above so that the last chapter is a super long with with a lot of love makng, yet also has pent up emotions that is finally being let out? I know that I would enjoy that kind of ending to a very fantastic story. I absolutely love this story of yours. Please update soon.

this is a very sweet story, in a twisted stalker kind of way. think about the police\'s song \'every breath you take\' and you might know where i\'m coming from. hermione has just found out this playboy is \'in love\' with her and has been for the past seven years when a young girl helped out a young boy and never so much as spoke to him again. i can see the romantic angle of this, but i can also see the rather obvious fixation too. now since he seems like he genuinely feels love for her, i\'ll go with the romance. if hermione\'s never had a boyfriend, i\'m going to assume she\'s a virgin. i really don\'t think hermione would let herself be taken like this. i say she should hold off jumping into bed with him and let him court her. otherwise, my cynical side will be telling me he\'s just pouring on the charm in his slytherin way to finally be able to brag about seducing every girl at hogwarts. that would be a cool twist if you do go the hot and heavy way hehe.

I love your Blaise! What a sweetheart! I think Hermione wouldn\'t jump into bed with Blaise right away. She needs time to think and analyze how she really feels about him. She\'s more cautious then most people her age. But you could have them fool around a bit!