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for Blaise's Diary

by TCardan

person ehu
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you want to know what i think? m\'kay then, i think that you should continue this story! it\'s so sweet! actually, one more chapter with the lemon and the closing portion with them going back to school and admitting that they\'re together would be sweet, or you could continue it! this has a makings of a way longer/angsty/captivating/filled with make-up sex and all those goodness involved! i hope that this continues! great job!
person jkrocksmysocks
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew. I thought u had forgot about this story! sooo glad you updated! And yay! An entire chapter full of hot sex! Woo! Make it gentle at first but then let Hermione take control for hot rough sex! Yay! Good story!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, this is so sweet! I love this story! Pleeease update soon, I can hardly wait!
person Pastel
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love it! I want Blaise too! I can just imagine what Blaise\'s bathroom looks like. I wish I had a mansion just like his. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon!
person Catpower
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fwoarrh! Very sweet, romantic and soppy - but then that\'s a great prelude to sex! Do write the next chapter quickly please.
person Fallenrose
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again a successful chapter

Blaise is an amazing character and you\'ve done a great job working on him

Also, a very sexual scene there, a glimpse of what is to come i hope

Fallenrose
person Avanell
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really felt I was there by the waterfall watching this gorgeous Italian hunk of a wizard. Breathtaking! can\'t wait for the finale! Earthshattering, I\'m sure!
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Won\'t comment about Blaise in case other readers haven\'t finished the book except to say I agree with you.

Wonderful chapter. I think you handled this perfectly, the gentle approach and yet the lusty romance to come (very much looking forward to Hermione\'s seduction or perhaps it will be a mutual one) :) I\'d have bloody been spying on him too. Clever buggar catching her like that. Still it all worked out rather nicely I must say. Well done!!
person Alice
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHH!! Dont stop there!! keep writing! ACK! great story though ;]
person kazfeist
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much as I like PWP, I think more than heavy petting in the universe you\'ve chosen to illustrate would be a bit out of character. But I don\'t think a couple more chapters, maybe after Hogwarts\' and their relative safety is established, in which they get to know each other better would be amiss. I just don\'t think it should happen during this first evening together. Other than that, a lovely bauble. Thanks for the read!