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for Blaise's Diary

by TCardan

person Narcissa Black
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous as always. One small thing, there is no M in Zabini. Not a very nutritious breakfast, missy, honey and chocolate. Although I do make an excellent honey chocolate pie. Back to the story, I will miss this one. Yummy.
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermione\'s birthday is in September (can\'t remember the date) which is my Spring so you\'re right by my count. LOL Besides, I got the impression you were trying to show that she was more mature then Ron (& Harry) and wanted them to realise she was responsible for her own decisions rather then remark on her age. Lovely ending to the story. Don\'t think I\'d ever get any housework done with Blaise around either. Especially if he was attached to my throat like he was with Hermione. (I really liked that bit - LOL) Pity it had to end but you chose the right place to finish it. And off I go to your next grand adventure. :)
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! cant wait for the next chapter
person Bean
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you made an excellent work in chapters 5 and 6. I trully liked them both.
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! Please write more!
person Tina
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! Amazing descriptions, I may say. I always imagined Blaise as a very exotic character too, for which I\'m a bit disappointed Rowling made him a bastard. But, hey! Draco\'s a bastard too, and he\'s damn hot!
Ok, I\'ll stop right there with dreaming about imaginary charaters. It was a cool story, I loved the idea of a diary that HAS to be read. It was interesting to read trough it. Congrats and update soon!
person Jeska
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. An epilogue would be wonderful.
person Avanell
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I want all that (epilogue with tigress and all) as well as others reaction to finding out...please? Awesome story.
person dragon34
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was so romantic and sweet. I think Blaise is written better as a romantic. Hermione is better written to fit her male counter part(s).
person Pastel
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this chapter! It was so believable and so very sweet. I hope you do do the epilogue.