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for Between Eros and Sin

by BlueFolly10

person Kayo
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the second story of yours that I have read and it meets my expectations (your naruto one was the first). I like the way you portrayed Draco... They are not all lovey dovey in this fic (not that that is bad or anything) and Draco is being a bastard (in a good way). So if there would happen to be another chapter or sequel or something, I would be very happy. The chapter isn't disjointed either which is nice. And such a teaser!

Kayo
person Siarra
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My goodness that was hot... Somehow you managed to imprison the intensity of that heated moment perfectly. The fic started out wonderfully and the way you describe everything, from the beginning to the end, is simply breathtaking. The way there doesn\'t seem to be any love lost between the characters may make the fic seem slightly harsh but it also makes it all the more on the edge. I used the word intense before and that is exactly how to describe this great story, the way the ambience is almost tangible in it\'s heatedness. The writing style is excellent, fitting the story. Bravo.
person blisblop
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your descriptions..so hot.